Friday, October 28, 2016

In the Mood for an Apple


          I’ve decided I like email consultations.  After learning a good deal about them and even getting to work with a couple of them in class this past week, I’m feeling pretty giddy about the prospect of doing a real one on my own.  I’m not saying I necessarily like them better than face-to-face appointments; let’s just call this a case of apples and oranges.
            So, one of the things I especially like about asynchronous online consultations is the chance it gives me to be alone with my thoughts.  With on-the-spot dialogue, I have an unfortunate tendency to put my foot in my mouth, come across not so eloquently, and in some other way manage to mess up.  Thankfully, email appointments allow me to keep all of that in check, and the result is a more polished, organized offering of feedback to the writer. 
            That being said, I realize that this type of consulting has its drawbacks, and for me, the most pressing one (even more than the inability to get immediate answers to questions) is the loss of non-verbal communication.  I don’t get to smile to the writer and gesture warmly towards a candy bowl.  I don’t get to make eye-to-eye contact that shows him or her that I’m genuinely happy to be of service; instead, my presence for the writer is nothing more than black type on a white background.  Because of this, I worry about what all I can do to make up for this discrepancy the best I can.
            In answer to my wonderings, I see the need to focus on developing the type of voice I have in the feedback I’ll be giving.  I suppose this involves some attention in the field of rhetoric (Oh wow—I can almost hear all the rhet-comp majors woop-wooping and saying, “Rhet-comp all the way!").  In other words, given the target audience (only the writer) and the message I want to convey (that I’m a professional who they can have confidence in but also enjoy on a peer-to-peer level), what rhetorical ideas should I be working with?  What does this look like in an email consultation?        Here’s what pops into the ole noodle:
            -I need to look and sound confident and knowledgeable, which includes a very cleanly written response.
            -I need to keep the academia-speak in check; I’m not writing to a professor, but rather a peer who needs to feel like I’m relatable.
            -My emails should include the voice that is quirky, optimistic, and excited to read what the writer has.
            -I need to be mindful that writer’s anxiety is still very real.  The medium of this type of consulting doesn’t allow me the visibility to notice a writer’s nervousness or anxieties, even if those feelings were most definitely present for him or her.  Because of this, I should take extra care into weaving encouragement throughout the feedback.
            -I need to make sure I don’t bite off more than the writer can chew.  The feedback I give should never overwhelm—this is something I have to watch myself closely over because I have the tendency to ramble.  I just see so many dang connective fibers between this thing here and that thing over there, and before I know it, I’ve talked about too many different ideas.
            Okay.  Now I feel like I’m prepared to give my first email consultation a whirl.  I’m ready to learn from the many times I’ll be falling flat on my face!

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